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August 8, 2018 By Michael Green Leave a Comment

Show, Don’t Tell (The Second Commandment)

Show, don't tell ... the second commandment of writing. Though it's probably the commandment that gives writers the biggest headache, it's probably the most rewarding one to obey, as we feel a great satisfaction when we see the results of doing it, as we know how hard we've worked for it. Show, don't tell: Carl was happy with his new school.  This is more telling, versus: As Carl … [Read more...] about Show, Don’t Tell (The Second Commandment)

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